Situation:
Your best friend cook for you and the fish was too salty.
How will you give feedback to him/her in order to motivate him/her to do a better job next time?
下图即为你组织语言的结构图
Example structure
•Opening(sincere praise & tellyour overall understanding):
SpeakerName,youdid a (speehobjective,show recognition) xxx speech, the core message isxxx, and I(tell your overall impression or feeling toward the speech).
For the body part, scan the bottom of the pyramid and come up insights, you could consider from below 4 parts.
Structure
Development
Voice
Body Language
LastlyI’ll give you a bonus to take away, which is the formula to quickly develop thee valuation speech content in the contest.
Closing: make the summary
You made a wonderful inspirational speech by conveying a powerful core message in the ending, if you could make the eye contact more effective, it will be even more inspiring.
