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英语各省份中考作文题汇总!(附高分范文和点评)

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英语各省份中考作文题汇总!(附高分范文和点评)

(5)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。

短文首句:The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea.

高分范文

【写作点拨】根据题目要求可知本文是一篇说明文,考生需要用英语介绍《老人与海》这本国外名著。写作要点在表格中已经给出。写作时,首先要介绍这本书的基本信息,如作者的名字和国籍;其次,介绍这本书的大概内容;最后,介绍为什么喜欢这本书。文章的段落依然呈现“三段式”的结构,层次分明。

【高分范文】

The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea,but finds it hard to take it home.On the way back,he has to fight against the fish,and the sea as well.

What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting withdifficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book: Man is not made for defeat. This tells us that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.(100 words)

山东滨州

【写作点拨】

文章需根据图表提示,介绍几种职业是怎样为社会做贡献的,且要说明学生应该怎么办。图表已给出了各职业名称和对应的关键词,给考生很大的提示作用。考生在构思时,第一段可总说中国人都在努力为建设美丽中国做贡献;第二段分别描述每种职业所做出的具体贡献;第三段阐述作为学生应该怎么做。

【高分范文】

四川绵阳

【写作点拨】

根据题干内容可知,本文是围绕“爱好”展开的,结构简洁明确。首先介绍爱好是什么,然后陈述理由,注意至少为3条。考生只要保证内容连贯,语法正确,且给出的理由充分即可。

【高分范文】

重庆A卷

照片背后的故事

在过去的日子里,我们曾经欢笑,也曾经哭泣……照片,或将这些精彩定格,或勾起你对往事的回忆。某英语网站向你发出邀请。请你按要求用英语写一篇文章,分享你照片背后的故事。

要求:

故事必须原创;

80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;

文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

故事必须原创;

80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;

文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考要点:

描述你的照片(时间,地点,人物……);

分享你的故事(起因,经过,结果……);

谈谈你的感受(感动,怀念,影响……)。

描述你的照片(时间,地点,人物……);

分享你的故事(起因,经过,结果……);

谈谈你的感受(感动,怀念,影响……)。

This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,

【写作点拨】

本文要求围绕“照片”叙述一个与之相关的故事,是一篇记叙文。根据参考要点可知,文章属于经典“三段式”的写作:1. 描述照片拍摄的时间、地点和人物等基本信息;2. 叙述与照片相关的故事,包括起因、经过和结果等;3. 谈论对事情的感受。写作过程中,要注意时态的变化:描述过去发生的事情主要用一般过去时,谈论对事情的感受主要用一般现在时。

【高分范文】

This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 while my dad looked younger. Look, we are playing ping pong happily.

I used to be a ping pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day’s work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!”

Now, I spend less time playing ping pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter!

重庆B卷

征文——我和朋友之间的故事

在我们成长的道路上,朋友是不可或缺的风景。在相知相伴的岁月里,留下了多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆!某英语报社以“A Story Between My Friend And Me”为题开展征文活动,请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。

要求:

故事必须原创;

80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;

文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

故事必须原创;

80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;

文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考要点:

分享故事(起因,经过,结果……);

表达感受(幸福,感动,思考……);

. ……

分享故事(起因,经过,结果……);

表达感受(幸福,感动,思考……);

. ……

A Story Between My Friend And Me

There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.

【写作点拨】

本文是一篇命题作文,并给出了参考要点。由题目“A Story Between My Friend and Me”可知写作的重点在于叙述故事,并表达感受。写作时,可选取个人与朋友之间印象深刻,且比较有教育意义的事件。叙述个人故事,要用第一人称,且时态主要为一般过去时,表达感受时,用一般现在时。

【高分范文】

There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.

Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot.

In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends.

浙江舟山

选书的理由

学校将举办“A Summer for Better English”活动,请你从下面的推荐书单中选择两本想阅读的书刊,然后用英语写一篇短文,在学校的English Corner分享。

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