【考点】NA:短文改错.
【分析】本文主要讲述作者第一次学开车的经历.由于紧张,弄不清左右,好在几分钟后,驾驶教练要作者停车,作者才轻松下来,但停在了路中间.
【解答】In the summer holiday following my eighteenbirthday,
I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard∧first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether.
The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turningleft!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.
A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenlystop just in the middle on the road.
【详解】
1.eighteen改为eighteenth 考查数词.此处应是第十八个生日,用序数词.
2.how hard后加the或my 考查冠词或代词.序数词前用定冠词the.或我学车的第一天,用形容词性物主代词.
3.so改为but/yet 考查连词.前后两个单句表示转折关系,用连词but/yet.
4.goes改为went 考查动词时态. 全文讲述的是已发生的事情,用一般过去时.
5.word改为words 考查名词复数.word的基本意思是"单词",指语言中能独立存在的最小表意单位,也可指"(说的)话,话语,言语,谈话"等,是可数名词,此时要用复数形式.
6.Turning改为Turn 考查祈使句.“Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turn left!”这些属于祈使句,要用动词原形.
7.去掉much 考查固定搭配.so…that…意为"如此/这么…以至于…",句型中的so是副词,常常用来修饰形容词或副词,常用句型为:主语+谓语+so+adj./adv.+that从句.已有副词so,much是多余的,要去掉.
8.late改为later 考查副词.later用于一段具体时间之后,表示从过去或将来算起的多长时间以后,但通常不指从现在算起的多久以后.
9.suddenly改为sudden 考查形容词.stop是名词,要用形容词修饰.
10.on改为of 考查介词.in the middle of意为"正在…当中; 在…的中部",是固定搭配.
【点评】高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.